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[Sonic: Flash Edition Demo]

An ok demo

A 6 out of 10 because you put a good amount of effort into this and you also seem as if you have some flash talent. Here are some tips before you submit the full game:
- Check for glitches in the game or have some one else check the game for glitches
*Trust me; if you try to check your own game for glitches you will not be able to find most of them.
- Make the stages WAY longer
*The first stage was only two screen sizes long
*Also, just so you know I had to right click and press the "forward" button to get past two of the frames. So you might want to fix that.
- Make sure that I can't get outside of the screen
*It happened multiple times
- Make a real boss fight

If you want any help on any of code, please don't hesitate to PM me.

VioletVulpine responds:

okay/

[Simple Jet Flyer]

bad and strange

OK This was badly draw and animated. Here some of the things wrong with this game.
-First off, what the hell are rocks doing in the air in the first place.
-Second, a nice shooting option would be nice because of the fact that it is almost impossible to dodge the rocks.
Also:
- Make the screen size larger so that I don't have to worry about the ground!
- Make a game that is playable for at least 5 seconds
- Please add some background music.
- Add more detail to the plane
- Make sure that I can't get out of the screen
(if you want help with that I can help you)
- Make sure that the plane's coordinates reset when you lose
A 3/10 and a 3/5

[StickFight RPG II]

Here are some problems you should consider to fix

A 7 out of 10 because of the bugs and flaws in the game.
I would like to say that I absolutely loved the game play. I loved the fact that this is a RPG that works in real time... but the real time doesn't work... or doesn't work like it should.
Here are some tips for the game:
- Get rid of the invincible in the game
- Give a limit to how much you can use the special (Without a limit, then there is no reason use the normal attack)
- Fix the upgrade button part of the game, because if you noticed you can press it and get a negative number for the points.
- Create more variety in the enemies after each fight because the game gets extremely repetitive.
- Add preloader
- Chose between a normal cursor or the created one, because having both is not good.
- Create more difficulty
- Give the ability to increase life
- Give more detail to the graphics

I hope this helps you the course of this game.
If you want any additional help for the game just message me and ask me what you need help with and I will do all I can to help.

[Geoffrey's Quest]

Nice and spooky

A great game. The only room for improvement is the fog. If you want to know how to make the fog look better please send me a message through my newgrounds account.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

ha yeah, its just a 50% opacity movie clip that comes by once every so often:P i'll definitely pm u soon

[Ground Jumper V2]

needs work but very fun

An 7 out of 10 because of the graphics, the difficulty to jump at the beginning, the interface, and the fact that you never really told me how to play the game(But i figured it out).
Things that could make this game better:
1) Make it so that you can save your self even though you start to fall
2) When I fell I couldn't see the ground... maybe you could add that also
3) Put more detail into the games graphics
4) Use [mouse.hide();] so that I don't have to see the mouse when I play the game
5) Make the stars more bright I can barely see them
6) animate the stick figure or change it change it to a real character

Hope this helps. Overall this is a fun and addicting game.

[AS3 Calculator]

Way to basic

This flash is;
One: Way to basic
Two: It doesn't have any outstanding AS3 actionscript (I could have done this with AS1 or even Java)
Three: All it had was sum, subtract, product and division

Maybe if it was a scientific calculator I would have given it a better score but then still! Its just a calculator program, and I'm sure that you will never see a calculator program on the top 50 greatest flash movies and games.

BrainToast responds:

ok
listen here

this flash doesn't have to do with if you can do it in AS1

This is to show what I can do with AS3 so don't dare tell me that you can do it in flash actionscript 1. I don't care about your AS1 actionscripting, I am happy with how well I did this so deal with it and stop posting for no reason. You brought my submission down to what it was after it passed judgement.

[:Tutorials for you:]

It was good

It was very good. A nice intuitive tutorial on flash, but it needs more info.

Yambanshee responds:

yea, this was just the first couple, i intent to make alot more, i just wanted to see what you all think abou the interface.

[Flash Tetris 2009]

well...ok

Well its a normal tetris game. Nothing special, no special effects that would "wow" me. Just a normal tetris game.

luksfarris responds:

pretty much it =]

[Spiraling Lasers]

Wow man!?

By god this is trippy! I was playing this for at least... um... what time is it? Oh my god! Where am I? Why am I 10 years older then before! What's going on!!!!! J.K.
(To the real review)
A 10 out of 10 because of the fact that this as very cool, and extremely fascinating, and it reminds me of hypnosis. Now I feel all weird in the head... and I like it!!!

[Mercenary Combat Struggle]

Excellent game my friend

Controls were on the spot, pretty fun, graphics were pretty good. The only thing I would suggest would be to make it have more of a time crisis style, because I got kinda bored just standing there clicking at enemies. Oh yeah, am I supposed to be able to skip all the levels by just pressing ENTER? Overall awesome game.
5/5
9/10