Kammce's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mouse Challenge 4]

First off!

Put in a preloader so I don't have to look at a blank screen for a long time!!!!

MVK-Productions responds:

I know, im not sure about that coz there is a preloader

[The Platformer BETA]

Not the so good

I will give a 4 out of 10 because the code was on the spot, but it was a little weird. The graphics were horrible, the music was annoying, and the game play was nothing to jump out of my sit for. This was a good start but you should really start putting some real games on newgrounds, not beta's. Put some real effort into it the next one and stride to make them the best you can.

TheGamer3000 responds:

the music got annoying to me after I played a few times. Sorry. I'll delete this during the week.

[Ultimate Labyrinth 2]

Nice game but...

The game was way to easy, but you did have a lot of things right with this game. One being that the game's music was good, graphics are O.K, and it was functional. Here are some things that might need changing. The portals should only teleport the square in a single place, not anywhere on the screen. Create some maps that need brain skill so its no so easy. Also, this game is too much like a platformer. You should make it so its more like a maze

Zoranan responds:

in the first game all the portals led to the same place, and everyone complained

[Chopper - Wardh style]

good game

Nice and simple
But it needs some work

First the obstacles are to hard to dodge
Second the graphics need some work especially the explosions
Third make the controls more complex then just space bar to go up and let go to go down.

But besides that the game is good.

wardh responds:

Okay thanks for the review. This really just is a 1-2 hour job I made in school to show a friend. So I didn't go all out on it.

[The ultimate batch TUT v2]

nice I learned some thing

A half of a score because of the lack of info you could have but into this tutorial. And it is very sloppy. Sorry but it was not the best it could have been

Oh yeah! if you are going to put a link that shows where a download link is then you should make it a dynamic text not the normal text.
And also try add these:
-Also make sure that all images taken are .png when you save them not .gif or .jpg because they come out bad when you import them.
- make the menu and interface look a lot more clean
-The arrow buttons are very off kilter an slated show that you put no effert into this game.
- Try adding a lot more info
- Try adding a custom cursor that really adds flare.
- If you are adding links into a button then put in this code;
on (press) {
getURL("http://www.kammcecorp.9k.com"
, "_blank");
}
-Use a real text box besides making your own text because that makes your flash tutorial look like crap!!
I hope this review helps you

lastly! All the links are glitched please fix them immediately with my code

iamrunegecko responds:

k, i will work on it

[Adair chain avoider]

I'm sorry but i disliked this to the most

With all my heart i HATED!!! This! I couldn't understand it the sound effects where horrible and annoying and I'm trying to be nice but my human self is trying to tell me that i should be honest not nice because this was not good at all. Not at all.

AdairTishlerKitty responds:

Adair Tishler (born October 3, 1996) is an American child actress, who has appeared in television shows such as Charmed, The Sarah Silverman Program and House, and has booked a few movie roles such as Within. She is currently portraying Molly Walker on NBC's Heroes and filming a short horror film, Ms. Goldman

She also has participated in theater productions of Cinderella and Sound of Music. Her résumé includes voice-over work, and she has performed in music videos-she appears in Martina McBride's video God's Will.

Her other performances include the role of Carrie in the short comedy 'Six and the City', together with Channing Nichols. Tishler has also appeared in the WB hit series, Charmed in its final season.

[Tutorial - 'Flames 1']

Thanks man

With tutorial this really made my fire effects look awesome. Thanks again.

OctoFlash responds:

i thank you again!

[Tutorial - 'Flames 2']

Thank you!

Your tutorial was very helpful and came in handy when I made my game. Thank you for submitting it and doing a great job of making an easy to learn tutorial.

OctoFlash responds:

glad to hear this (okay, read this.....) thanks

[VistaTouch]

Wow Nice Idea but needs more!!

This was an really cool idea. I gave it an 7 out of 10 because;
1) It worked better than I thought
2) Its totally original (besides the fact that you used the ipod touch and vista ideas)
Now if you made it more functional like;
1) display the internet page on the flash simulation
2) being able to upload music and videos
3) And make it more functional
Now here are the issues
1) you couldn't scroll
2) most of the functions didn't work like the calander and mostly everything else
Cool simulation but lacks real computer feel.
If you make another flash simulation please take this into consideration.
Also! This would be a lot easier to make and use if you just use java, python, or C++.

andy70707 responds:

umm, thanks, the scrolling would take too long, and the calendar is real, it automatically updates with the month and the days. Also, in flash, it is imposible to load/view HTML documents. Yuo could do it with an XML page, but thats a bit too complex. I know how to iget it to import video and pictures, but its not a photo/video storage app, its an ipod/vista simulation.

[FearUnlimited Issue2 Demo]

Totally Awesome

Dude! I have been hoping for this demo forever, and it is a great improvement from issue 1. The game play is more straight forward, and easier to use then issue 1. And the graphics have had an up boost too.

Try to putting back that electric spinning attack (sorry I don't know the name of the move) on to the twin spike tonfus's.
One other thing! The bosses block to much and it makes it hard to attack, and when you do you only do a little damage before he starts blocking again.

Dizimz responds:

Heres a reply to you and the previous guy. the spinning electric attack is in the full version. it works differently but its a down+D move (aerial) for hinu and jukata.

which whirls and falls to the ground. its a much faster alternative to the previous move. and if you tap D twice while holding down, You will slam to the ground extra hard.

games long behind in development, mostly due to the lack of ability for me to work. It will be back on track in about a month.

but anyways thanks